Comments on: The Retail Show

By: Davide Giliati

Davide Giliati — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 15:22:53 +0000

Voice acting / Sound Production is very below par.

By: Jean

Jean — Wed, 18 Mar 2009 14:03:19 +0000

Super funny, great work, looking foward to see more. 2 thumbs up!!!

By: Bruna

Bruna — Tue, 10 Mar 2009 14:10:51 +0000

Well you’ve certainly established a unique style of drawing and writing. I enjoyed Otto’s quirks. He’s a defined character that could take on any type of situation.
I like his determination and naivety and I think he will always maintain that regardless of what he thinks he’s achieving.
Good job and looking forward to seeing more !

By: Elias

Elias — Fri, 06 Mar 2009 17:08:12 +0000

Wow that was a great keep up
the good work on the 2nd part

(your brother elias)

By: Ana

Ana — Fri, 06 Mar 2009 15:33:18 +0000

Dans un monde où tout va vite, voilà enfin quelque chose de différent! Pendant que les images défilent à leur rythme, on a le temps d’admirer les couleurs et d’assimiler les paroles.
Bravo! Continue comme ça!

By: Harry

Harry — Fri, 06 Mar 2009 11:59:07 +0000

Hey Antoine – I must admit the network here in South Africa doesn’t allow me to watch as much as I would like (too damn slow!) but I’ve seen the first 2 Ep and I like it bud!

I’m crazy about the designs and the look of the show. The animation, in my view, could flow a little more but it’s always too easy to judge:)

Keep it up dude! I’ll keep trying to watch more ;-)

Hope to see you here some day.
Peace!

By: Jean-Aymeri

Jean-Aymeri — Thu, 05 Mar 2009 21:06:56 +0000

Noa :)

It’s good to take a stand for your friend I respect that !

Being very familiar myself with 3D I appreciate the hard work and I think the concept is great…

For my taste I do think that the break, between each characters sentences doesnt add anything…And woul love a more normal dialogue “flow” between the characters…

Just trying to be objective here an to help. And to be honest i never noticed that “uneven pace” in family guy…so that is why i made that comment…

I really look forward to more. Retail is off to a good start !

By: Antoine Lamothe

Antoine Lamothe — Thu, 05 Mar 2009 19:41:23 +0000

Great show!!! New and original, this show could definitly put Montreal on the map!! Keep up the good work!!!

By: Antoine

Antoine — Thu, 05 Mar 2009 18:46:51 +0000

thanks for all the great comments, support and constructive criticsm everybody!!!

By: Noa

Noa — Thu, 05 Mar 2009 18:38:09 +0000

Jean-Aymeri, I said that “it reminds me of” and not “it is on the same level as” Family Guy. I’m thinking about the fast pace/slow pace kind of montage, as opposed to the many other cartoons who tend to have the same rhythm from start to end, as well as the pretty absurd sense of humor.

And if it seems to you that I’m “over-reacting”, oh well… I am working myself in the 2D/3D industry and I am quite enthusiastic to finally see a real cartoon from Montreal trying to make it big, especially when that guy did everything alone… trust me, and I know what I’m talking about, this must have been very hard.

So thumbs up for what you’ve done so far!